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Screenwriters and filmmakers: how to attract stars to your script

What are the odds that a new screenwriter or filmmaker could get a star to appear in his or her film? Small to none, you say? Actually, the odds may be much better than you think.

One young filmmaker who succeeded is director Aaron Schneider. His movie project was “Get Low,” written by Chuck Provenza and based on the true story of a hermit back in the 1930s who staged his own funeral in order to find out what people would say about him.

It’s not the most obviously commercial concept, and Schneider has said that raising the money to make it was an uphill battle. However, he ended up with a great cast: Robert Duvall, Sissy Spacek, and Bill Murray.

When he and producer Dean Zanuck approached Murray’s representative they were told to forget it. But Schneider decided to take a more personal route. He took three days to compose a letter and emphasized how much he admired Murray and why he wanted him in his film. He got the letter to Murray, who agreed to be in the movie.

It’s easy to assume that a star wouldn’t possibly be interested in being in a low-budget film, but remember that even stars are not busy all the time. If the project is interesting enough they’d rather do it, even for a low salary, rather than sitting around doing nothing.

Of course this tends to work best with actors who are not currently making million a picture. It typically also works better with older actors who may be rich enough to choose roles based on how challenging they would be or how enjoyable to play. Also, the big studio offers are less common for actors once they’re no longer in the first bloom of youth, so these actors have more time on their hands.

If you want to approach a well-known actor regarding reading your script or appearing in your film, here are some guidelines:

* You can go through their agent or manager first, but don’t be surprised if they turn it down without even showing it to their client. These people get 15% to 25% of what their clients make, so it’s not in their interest to have their clients work for a small amount.

* Try to find a personal “in” to the actor. Sometimes you can find their email addresses or their office addresses if they maintain a production company. For mail, try writing “Personal” on the envelope.

* Best of all is speaking to them in person. If they’re appearing at a film festival or other public event, approach them respectfully, have a 30-second speech ready, and just ask whether you can leave a script for them at their hotel or even give it to them then and there. Some of them will say no, you have to have an agent send the script. However, then you can contact an agent and say that you met the star who asked to see your script via an agent. Most agents will agree to handle the script on that basis–even if only for that one transaction. Alternately, the star may say you need to sign a release. Again, if you then contact his or her office, you can say you’re doing so at the star’s request and go ahead and sign the release.

* In any contact with the star, be sincere. Flattery is fine, but don’t come across like a stalker. You’re hoping they will enter a professional agreement with them, so keep your fandom under control. (However, it’s hard to over-flatter an actor).

* If you’ve tried everything with your first choice of star and it doesn’t work out, go on to your second choice–but of course tell them they’re your first choice!

The fact is that actors are just people and most of them love to take on a challenging role. If you catch them at the right time, they can be won over and add star power to your low-budget project.

Jurgen Wolff has been a script doctor on movies starring Eddie Murphy, Kim Cattrall, and Michael Caine, and written a miniseries starring Rob Lowe (“Midnight Man”) and TV movies for the Olsen Twins, as well as more than 100 produced episodes of television (including 9 episodes of “Relic Hunter”). He teaches screenwriting internationally and his books include “Your Writing Coach” (Nicholas Brealey Publishing). His screenwriting site is http://www.ScreenWritingSuccess.com, where you can find more tips and also sign up for his free monthly screenwriting success newsletter.


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Ethan Coen and Joel Coen: Collected Screenplays 1: Blood Simple, Raising Arizona, Miller’s Crossing, Barton Fink

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These four early works by the internationally lauded filmmaking team deal with the subject for which they are best known: corruption and crime in situations that combine the real and the surreal with the hilarious. Of the scripts included here, Barton Fink–an intense look at the psychological ruin of a New York playwright trying to make it in 1940s Hollywood–is a masterful culmination of these themes.

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By utilising this structure, screenwriters can quickly build effective and quality stories. There are more than 188 stages to the Hero’s Journey.

The Godfather (1972) Summary

Call to Adventure: Sollozzo asks to meet with the Corleone’s to discuss funding a drug running operation.

Refusal of the Call: Vito Corleone refuses drugs because he believes they will have a negative impact for the Mafia in the future.

Supernatural Aid: Michael has two mentors: Kay leads him to the good side and Vito pulls him towards the dark (“what miracles you perform for strangers”).

Crossing the First Threshold: Vito gets shot. Michael, for the first time, sits in on the meeting between Tessio and Sonny and actively takes part in the family decision-making process.

Physical Separation from the Old World (Belly of the Whale): Michael saves his father in the hospital; his face is deformed by captain McCluskey.

Transformation (Road of Trials): leading to Micheal shooting McCluskey and Sollozzo.

Meeting with the Goddess: Michael meets Apollonia.

Rebirth through Death (Woman as Temptress): Female phone call leading to Connie getting beaten; Sonny gets shot; Apollonia dies in the bomb explosion.

Atonement: Vito meets with the heads of the five families.

Apotheosis: Vito realises that it was Barzini all along.

Ultimate Boon: There is peace between the families.

Refusal of the Return: Clemenza and Tessio are refused permission to push back Barzini; Vito cannot break the peace.

Magic Flight: Michael arranges for the move to Vegas.

Rescue from Without: Vito dies.

Crossing the Return Threshold: Vito’s funeral; Tessio sets up Michael.

Master of the Two Worlds: Michael is both good and evil: he “settles all business” while accepting that he will be Godfather to Connie’s baby; Carlo is taken care off / Sonny is revenged.

Freedom to Live: Michael lies to Kay; Michael is accepted as the new Godfather with his own lieutenants.

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Four Screenplays: Studies in the American Screenplay

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In a field being transformed by technology, Syd  Field shows you what works and why and how to find  new ways to create a truly outstanding film using  four extraordinary examples: Thelma &  Louise, Terminator 2: Judgement  Day, The Silence Of The  Lambs, and Dances With  Wolves.

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By utilising this structure, screenwriters can quickly build effective and quality stories. There are more than 188 stages to the Hero’s Journey.

Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981)- Summary

Call to Adventure: Army intelligence want Indy to find the Ark of the Covenant before the Nazis do.

Refusal of the Call: Army intelligence not sure of they want Indy to seek the Ark; Marcus (and later Sallah) warn Indy that the Ark is something that was not meant to be disturbed.

Supernatural Aid: Marcus and Sallah are Indy’s two mentors.

Crossing the First Threshold: Indy travels to Nepal, where he meets Marion.

Physical Separation from the Old World (Belly of the Whale): Marion’s bar is burnt down; they both leave for Cairo.

Transformation (Road of Trials): Indy finds the location of the Well of Souls.

Meeting with the Goddess: Indy steals into the Well of Souls to recover the location of the Ark.

Rebirth through Death (Woman as Temptress): Indy and Marion buried alive in the tomb.

Atonement: Indy battles the Nazis.

Apotheosis: Belloq is about to depart with the Ark; no time left.

Ultimate Boon: Indy captures the Ark.

Refusal of the Return: Indy and Marion depart. Say goodbye to Sallah.

Magic Flight: Indy and Marion on the boat home.

Rescue from Without: The Nazi submarine appears and retakes the Ark.

Crossing the Return Threshold: Indy threatens to blow up the Ark.

Master of the Two Worlds: Indy knows to close his eyes.

Freedom to Live: The Ark hidden away by army intelligence.

The detailed deconstruction and the Complete 188 stage Hero’s Journey and FREE 17 stage sample and other story structure templates can be found at http://www.managing-creativity.com/

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The Screenwriter’s Bible: A Complete Guide to Writing, Formatting, and Selling Your Script

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The “Screenwriter’s Bible” is one of the most popular, authoritative, and useful books on screenwriting. A standard by which other screenwriting books are measured, it has sold 150,000 copies in its ten-year life. Always up-to-date and reliable, it contains everything that both the budding and working screenwriter need under one cover – six books in one! Features: How to Write a Screenplay – a concise course on screenwriting basics; Correct Format for Screenplays and Teleplays – a style guide to

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In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188+ stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE 188 STAGE HERO’S JOURNEY involves a number of major phases, including:

a) The arrival from Another World into an Ordinary World.

b) The Ordinary Self, that has come about as a result of being in the Ordinary World.

c) The encouragement from the Ordinary World into a New World.

d) The gradual dissolution of the Old Self.

e) The becoming of the New Self.

f) The thrusting away from the New Self and New World.

g) The confrontation with challenges.

h) The mastering of the Old and New Worlds and Selves.

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(simply go to http://www.heros-journey.info/ for full details)Magical Aids are integral to the vast majority of successful stories but are seriously misunderstood. There are various categories, including:

ABRIDGED TIPS, EXCERPTS AND EXAMPLES:

THE CASTLE

Understanding the Hero’s Journey and Transformation is all about understanding the metaphors.

One of the most useful is The Castle. This is often a fixed location within the New World, the development of which, represents the Hero’s evolution. Often it is a place of abode that the Hero is initially a Fish out of Water in, but gradually comes to represent the Hero’s home.

In Gorillas in the Mist (1988), Dian Fossey only plans to stay in the hut on the mountain for a short time, but eventually it and the mountain become her home.

In Pretty Woman (1990), Vivian is initially a Fish out of Water in the hotel, but eventually she calls it her home.

In The Servant (1963), Hugo is initially a servant in the house, but gradually comes to own it.

Learn more…

WRITE THAT SCREENPLAY!

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Good Will Hunting: A Screenplay

Good Will Hunting: A Screenplay

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As director Gus Van Sant observes in the introduction to Matt Damon’s and Ben Affleck’s screenplay Good Will Hunting, the two young actors somewhat resemble the characters they play in the film: they’re best friends, and Affleck (who plays Chuckie) habitually chauffeurs Damon (Will), who doesn’t drive. Van Sant says we can see how badly Damon drives by watching the film’s last scene, in which he is actually driving the car with the camera mounted on it. But Damon and company write better than he

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Screenwriting Tips from a Screenplay Contest Judge

Do you realize what you’re saying??

In the theatre, they read plays aloud over and over in the process of script development, and one of the reasons they do this is to hear the dialogue. When I hear dialogue in my head, it might sound very good, but then when I hear a person actually speak it, I often have an impulse to jump in front of a bus. And over and over and over and over, when I read screenplay entries to BlueCat, I am immediately dismayed when the characters start speaking. Excellent everything else, awful dialogue. And I often wonder if the writer has actually heard the lines they have written for their characters out loud. Either read the whole thing aloud to yourself, or even better, get a group of your friends to read it. You do not need professional actors to evaluate dialogue. Just people excited to help. Videotape it. I have videotaped readings, and then sat down and worked out an entire rewrite off the tape, addressing every single line that bothered me. Which leads me to another thing.

Ha.

It’s hard to pass a screenplay on to industry contacts if an unfunny joke is sitting in the middle of page two. It’s highly difficult if there’s twelve by page five. You might have a payoff in your third act that would break my heart, but if your jokes are poor, the heart of your audience will be shot, probably resentful, and your work will be recycled. Please try your humor out. If your beats aren’t funny to some people, rewrite. Trust a truly hilarious bit is coming. Think of the patience you need to muster through this writing process as courage, because it is.If you find you are not funny, write a script that is not funny. Many, many great scripts are not funny, as we all know.

Mispellings.

Do you think the development people in Los Angeles, basically the smartest people in the film industry, will not be annoyed and continue to read your script when you have misspelled three words in the first five pages? Perhaps. How do you feel when you’re reading something and you find misspelled words? How does your attitude shift towards the author? Exactly. If you don’t think many scripts have this problem, start a screenwriting competition.

OKAY, WE GOT IT!

Try to limit your scene description. When a person opens your script, how many INCHES of action slug are they looking at on page one? Is there anyway you can convey what you want us to SEE with less words? I always go back and CUT CUT CUT to prevent my screenplay from fatiguing my reader with excess words as they try to listen for my story. Do we need to know what necklace someone is wearing? We all understand making motion pictures is collaborative. I strive to let the art department and the costumer and the prop master and so on DO THEIR JOB by not making their decisions in the screenplay, because I have little passion for it and don’t do it well. They will make their own choices, and most likely better ones, so why bother? Always use fewer words to say the same thing.

It’s not show and tell, it’s show not tell.

I constantly find myself being told something by the screenplay the viewer of the film will not be aware of. Screenplays are not literature. They are words assembled to describe what motion pictures will play out on the screen. Telling us a character is a jealous person is passive and dull. Showing a character in an act of jealousy is more effective and essentially cinematic. Let the words and actions of your characters carry your story. This is not easy. You want the actor or director to understand what you want and what you mean. Allow the description of physical actions and the recording of spoken words reveal the narrative to the filmmakers. The script will read faster and offers the reader a richer opportunity to imagine and discover.

The Joy of Making Things Up.

I really cherish the idea, that as a writer, I can make things up. If I want the guy to say something, all I have to do is type it. But I have to fight against creating characters and interactions amongst characters derived from movies I have watched and television I have seen. I often find myself writing a scene only to realize I’m not drawing from my imagination or my own life experience or my observations of people, I’m drawing from the millions of hours of observing actors play human beings on television and in movie theaters. And because I’m writing a “MOVIE,” it is even more difficult, because I’m fighting against a subconscious or unconscious observation that this is “how people act in movies.” Stop yourself and ask, would this happen on planet Earth? Do I know how people from Miami really speak? What would a person actually say if they had a gun in their face? Can you possibly imagine what could happen? This is your opportunity to be truly imaginative. Answer your own expectations of original work. A mature writer develops a strong capacity to recognize and reject the false.

Ouch.

Forced exposition. This is when a brother tells a sister on page two that he will be attending a school which dad wouldn’t pay for because he bought a farm that the whole family will be moving to tomorrow because he found that the city was a really bad place to live in after mom was really scared because of that mugging thing that happened after they came back from the sister’s graduation from high school. When characters engage in an unbelievable conversation about matters in which they would be familiar with, or when they proclaim something completely out of nowhere simply to inform the audience of key facts crucial to their understanding of the movie, you have a problem. This awkward exposition will not be seen as genuine human behavior and will detach your audience from the emotional current of your story. Exposition is necessary and difficult to execute. Be careful how you offer information crucial to your story at the start of your screenplay. This is a common problem in early drafts. Exposition needs to be seamless and graceful.

Format.

You know what? Go get a script and copy what you think it looks like and you’ll be fine. Trust me. Spec scripts are sitting on desks all over Hollywood and their format is not consistent at all. Getting crazy about format sells screenwriting software. I use two tab settings and copied stuff from a book and not one person in the film industry has ever said a thing to me in ten years. But if your script looks like a book, or a poem, or a magazine article, your screenplay format is wrong. Just make it look a little like a movie script, and if it kicks ass, guess what.

So do you.

Gordy Hoffman

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Winner of the Waldo Salt Screenwriting Award at the Sundance Film Festival for LOVE LIZA , Gordy Hoffman has written and directed three digital shorts for Fox Searchlight. He made his feature directorial debut with his script, A COAT OF SNOW, which world premiered at the 2005 Locarno International Film Festival. He is also the founder of the BlueCat Screenplay Competition. Dedicated to develop and celebrate the undiscovered screenwriter, BlueCat provides written screenplay analysis on every script entered. In addition, Gordy offers screenwriters personalized feedback on their scripts through his consultation service, www.screenplaynotes.com.


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Your Screenplay Sucks!: 100 Ways to Make It Great

Your Screenplay Sucks!: 100 Ways to Make It Great

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A lifetime member of the Writer’s Guild of America who has had three feature films produced from his screenplays, Akers offers beginning writers the tools they need to get their screenplay noticed.

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